My fourth poem for wednesday. Is this anygood.?

Ah, at last I connect. Here's your soul in your words. I love the anger, the rage, the tension of the energy in my shoulders while I'm reading it. You're inciting compion while speaking out hatred, preaching love through pain. The message that you're sending (at least to me) is that none should have to live their lives feeling that way. This isn't an emo wrist slit poem, it's something deeper. BTW the line "none of you could not care less" makes no sense. It's the whole double negative thing.