Is this poem any good?

It's very emotional. You're talking about living to China, Right? *HIGH FIVE SISTER*. Yeah I know how it is going back to America where everyone speaks your language and you feel like you aren't a stranger and stuff. It's a nice poem. Was it supposed to rhyme? I think if you make it rhyme, people will think you took more time to write this. No offense, but right now it's just kind of random thoughts thrown together without it rhyming.